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Tommorrow may seem so daunting
but you mustn't start to dread
For everything may happen still
reguardless of doubts in your head.
but you mustn't start to dread
For everything may happen still
reguardless of doubts in your head.
i recently tweaked the last stanza from 'what's' to 'doubts' i think it conveys the meaning much better.
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I like it although you may want to rephrase/reword the last line as I think the use of the word 'whats' hinders the flow. Nice little optimistic poem like the kind of bleak optimism drug addicts and convicts have. Well done...