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Tomorrow

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Tommorrow may seem so daunting
but you mustn't start to dread
For everything may happen still
reguardless of doubts in your head.
i recently tweaked the last stanza from 'what's' to 'doubts' i think it conveys the meaning much better.
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Obsidian-Nightfall's avatar
I like it although you may want to rephrase/reword the last line as I think the use of the word 'whats' hinders the flow. Nice little optimistic poem like the kind of bleak optimism drug addicts and convicts have. Well done...